Please review my LinkedIn Profile

[Tim Sova]

Hi – submitting my profile for review after completing the profile accelerator…..thanks in advance

https://www.linkedin.com/in/tim-sova/

[n d]

Hi @tim-sova! Thank you for submitting your profile for review – I have received it and will provide feedback shortly. Great to have you in the program with us!

 

[n d]

Hi @tim-sova, thank you for your patience while I reviewed your profile!

I’m happy to welcome you to the program – you can see my comments below:

Your profile photo looks fantastic! Very professional and engaging.

Your background banner image is in the right direction! In my opinion, I believe we can have our graphic designer, Lindsey, create a stronger image for you. I like that everyone on your team is pictured, but the logo in between isn’t doing much. I’d like you to email Lindsey your logos and images, with a description of your field of work, and she will create something better for you.

Headline (words under the name): 

What you currently have written is “Real Estate Broker Associate at RE/MAX Platinum”  BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!

About section:

Excellent job with the content in your sales letter! When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.

Also, you HAVE all the content, it just needs to be better organized. Right now, your paragraphs are way too chunky making it difficult to read. I recommend breaking them up a bit.

Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program!

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Here is what we look for in a profile:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/

Call to action at the end:

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂

[Tim Sova]

@negeen-dargahi  I’ve made adjustments to our headline and about section – please review and provide feedback

https://www.linkedin.com/in/tim-sova/

[n d]

Hi @tim-sova! Wonderful – below are my comments.

Your headline looks super! I removed the “&” symbol and the “…” so it flows better:

Looking for a Successful Real Estate Sale for the Most Money, Fewest Problems, And Least Amount of Time? I’m Your Dependable Local EXPERT Can Get Your Home SOLD ☆☞Message Me!

^ you want to specify if you help with sellers or buyers. This is so your message is direct (you can of course elaborate in your About section but for here, direct is best)

About Section looks GREAT!

Now that everything looks ready to go, I would personally recommend having Lindsey create a better banner image for you. This could really help your page stand out from the rest. She can also add the photo of you and your team into a better background.

Aside from that, you’re good to go and can move forward.

Excellent work!

[Tim Sova]

@negeen-dargahi

Thanks for the feedback…..I’ve reached out to Lindsey just now and will work with her to update our banner image.  I have a question….did you say our Headline is good now or did you want us to edit again?  You mentioned ^ you want to specify if you help with sellers or buyers. This is so your message is direct (you can of course elaborate in your About section but for here, direct is best)

I wasn’t sure what to do with this or are you just stating that we did mention working with sellers already in our Headline?

 

[n d]

Hi @tim-sova! Wonderful – I’m glad you’re in contact with Lindsey.

Yes, so for the headline, I noticed it wasn’t specified if you helped sellers or buyers. That’s why with my example, I just used an example as a seller. You can use what I wrote above or you can tweak it to fit what’s best for you.

Hope that helps!

[Tim Sova]

yes thank you again!

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