Please Review My LinkedIn Profile

[Jobst Blachy]

http://www.linkedin.com/in/joe-blachy 

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[n d]

Hi @jobst-blachy! Your profile photo looks good and nice job getting that fixed!

What are the black lines in your headline? If you could remove those icons, that would be great.

To follow grammar guidelines, I’d like you to remove the capitalization of words that do not need them. Your sentences all have words that are capitalized. Please fix those.

Once you make those changes, you are good to move forward 🙂

[Jobst Blachy]

Thanks Negeen. I just want to be clear about the Capitalization and Grammar you are referring to.  The example for COPY that HECP provided has capitalized letters in the Headline, as well as the copy for the Raw Content. Am I not supposed to follow those guidelines that your company has provided? Let me know thanks!

[n d]

Hi there @jobst-blachy! Absolutely for the headline to have those capitalized words, but it’s a lot harder to read in your About section. But again, you can choose what you feel is best but those are my thoughts 🙂

I hope that helps!

 

[Jobst Blachy]

Ok Negeen I just updated our profile to eliminate Capitalized words and will resubmit our profile for review! Thanks. I would just make one suggestion. All of the examples your company provided use Capitalized words and if you want clients to mimic those examples you might want to write a disclosure or something to note that you personally don’t recommending using Caps. I put a lot of time into molding our profile information and then you guys have suggested multiple changes that could have been avoided if the examples ran true. Thanks and have a great weekend.

[n d]

Hi @jobst-blachy, absolutely, and thank you for your feedback on that! We apologize for any confusion! Your profile looks GREAT – nice job implementing the feedback. You are good to move forward 🙂

 

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