Please Review My LinkedIn Profile

[Jobst Blachy]

http://www.linkedin.com/in/joe-blachy 

[n d]

Hi there, @jobst-blachy! It’s wonderful to have you here in the program with us! Below are my comments on your profile:

Your banner background image is unique! If you want to see what our graphic designer, Lindsey, can do for you, send her an email detailing what your field of work is in and she will create something custom for you.

Lindsey@coredm.com

Profile Photo: you look great in your photo but your head is cut off. Please send that image to Lindsey and have her resize the photo and add a white background for you. This will help your photo pop!

Headline (words under name):

What you currently have written is “Owner / Broker at Petoskey Real Estate Group”  BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!

Here is one example:

Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!

About Section:

This looks FANTASTIC! I would recommend removing the capitalized letters of words that don’t need to be capitalized. This will really help with the readability. Aside from that, it looks great and has very good information!!!

[Jobst Blachy]

After I submit my profile for the 2nd review what happens then? I also never received my profile accelerator to copy and paste. I also contacted Lindsey@coredm.com on thursday to fix my profile picture and have not heard back yet. Let me know your thoughts please and thanks!

Heather

[n d]

Hi @jobst-blachy, have you implemented my feedback into your actual LinkedIn profile page? If so, let me know and I’ll review your LinkedIn page again!

Additionally, please email Lindsey again – she is typically very responsive. Please cc me –> negeen@coredm.com

@erik-wilhelmsson would you please check our system to see if you can submit the profile accelerator again to his email, please?

 

 

[Erik Wilhelmsson]

Thank you @negeen-dargahi! @jobst-blachy and Heather I have checked and you did indeed complete your Profile Accelerator.

I just resubmitted it which will send you a copy via email at joe@joeblachy.com. If for any reason that isn’t showing in your email, please do double check in case it landed in the Spam/Junk Folder or Promotions tab depending on your email provider.

I’ve also just forwarded you the Profile Accelerator as well to that same email address, just in case, so that you have the results there along with Negeen cc’ed. The email I forwarded will be coming from erik.wilhelmsson@coredm.com with Subject Line: Fw: [HECP] New Profile Accelerator – Jobst Blachy

Hope that helps and have a great day!

Thanks and talk soon,
Erik Wilhelmsson

• This reply was modified 2 years, 6 months ago by Erik Wilhelmsson.

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