Great profilephoto! Your banner looks okay – if you send over to Lindsey, she can add an image of a home and make something better and custom for you – it’s better to give people visuals and something professionally made.
Excellent headline. The stats will really make a difference – especially with it added in to the headline slot.
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Yuo have the content, but there’s far too much focus on you and not enough on them. I recommend replacing a lot of “I” with “you”.
So talk about yourself in 1-3 sentences max, but if you want to get them hooked, you want to speak to them. For example:
When YOU work with me, I make sure you are getting qualified buyers coming to your property!
If you’re READY for _______ message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
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Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂
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