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Hi @wilma-mixon-halls, nice job taking massive imperfect action on your profile!! Below is my feedback:
Great profile photo! Can you send it to our graphic designer, Lindsey, and have her add a white background for you?? Once she sends the photo back, please zoom in more so we can see your face clearly.
You need a background banner image (blue rectangle behind profile photo). I’d also like you to email Lindsey and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better.
Headline (words under name):
This needs some work. How about filling out this template:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
Summary:
Right now, there’s way too much focus on you and not enough on them. ALSO – there needs to be better information and better organization to lead them effortlessly through your sales letter. I’d like you to look back through the lesson, please.
Please refer to these profiles from other realtors in the program. Copy the FORMAT/outline and pay attention to the way they lead you through their profile.
They detail HOW they help their clients, WHO they work with, etc. This is what you need in your profile as well.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/Please make sure you watch Halle’s video called: “BENEFITS MARKETING and BENEFITS MARKETING II videos in the Transformational Business Strategy module (bottom middle module on your MAIN DASHBOARD – turquoise with a bullseye) video index is to the right of the video window, in alphabetical order.
There’s far too much emphasis in here on YOU and not enough on THEM – these videos will help you see why it’s important to make it so much more about them!
You could start your summary off asking 3 short and sweet and POWERFUL pain point questions!
You also need a call to action. How about this:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂
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