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    • #31162

      Bill Toujouse
      Participant
        @btoujouse@gmail.com

        I have changed it. Any assistance would be greatly appreciated.

        Bill

         

        https://www.linkedin.com/in/constructionprofitexpert/

         

         

         

         

      • #31229

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @bill-toujouse, I can already tell you’re going to be a rockstar in this program! SUPER job taking action on your profile! Below is my feedback:

          Nice profile photo! Very professional and engaging.

          Background Photo: What you have now is too loud. Our graphic designer, Lindsey, can create something better for you to use that will really showcase your field of business.

          Please email her and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something for you to use!

          Lindsey@coredm.com

          Headline:

          What you have is really good BUT it’s a touch loud as well. Below I’ve tweaked it. Please use if you find it is suitable:

          Want To REDUCE Your TAX Bill by $11-312K /YR. And INCREASE Your Bottom Line by 30-40%?☆☞ Message Me!

          Summary:

          You exceeded my expectations on your profile. You provided attention-grabbing information while also getting right to the point. Excellent!

          Very proud of you and the work you put into this.

          You’re good to move on – if you’d like me to check out your changes when they’re made, please tag me!

        • #31234

          Bill Toujouse
          Participant
            @btoujouse@gmail.com

            What sort of background picture should I use? I am serving the construction niche, so I thought a construction background should be ok.

            Now, I have another one that I am going to change to. Let me know please if this is better.

             

            Bill

            https://www.linkedin.com/in/constructionprofitexpert/

          • #31255

            n d
            Keymaster
              @negeen@coredm.com

              Hi @bill-toujouse, please email Lindsey in regards to your background image.

              She will personalize a background photo and send it over for your approval.

              Lindsey@coredm.com

              Here’s some of her work (as an example):

              https://www.linkedin.com/in/edbensonrealtor/

              https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

              https://www.linkedin.com/in/eavelyn/

               

               

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