5 years, 11 months ago-
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http://www.linkedin.com/in/kwstephanielee
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Hi @stephanie-lee! NICE job taking action on your profile!
Beautiful profile photo! Can you zoom in more so we can see your face clearly?
You also need a better background photo. I want you to email our graphic designer and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something for you to use!
Headline:
This is the best piece of ‘real estate’ on your LinkedIn profile. Let’s really make it POP. How about something like this…
Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!
Summary:
Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important.
How about you ask 3 POWERFUL pain point questions your clients struggle with.
What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?” THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.
Also, your paragraphs are a bit chunky and need better organization.
(check out the examples I provided and look at the format which you can copy)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/You want to provide information that is:
Telling your readers WHO you work with, HOW you help them and WHY they should work with you.
Call To Action:
You need a better one!
“If you’re ready for _______ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me in your revision!! 🙂
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@negeen-dargahi I’m not sure that you reviewed my profile. You indicated another person. I’m making sure you have looked at my profile. Please let me know if you haven’t received it for review. Thanks.
Stephanie Lee
http://www.linkedin.com/in/kwstephanielee This is my linked profile.
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@@stephanie-lee Looks like @negeen-dargahi just tagged the wrong person by accident.
This feedback is applicable to your profile!
Make those changes (looks like you already changed your headline and it looks GREAT!) and then post the link here again and tag me or Negeen!
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@negeen-dargahi Please review my revised linkedin profile, and give feedback. I changed my background photo, but if you think it needs to be changed again, please let me know. I sent a message to Lindsey, as you instructed. Thanks for everything!
http://www.linkedin.com/in/kwstephanielee
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Looks fantastic, @stephanie-lee 🙂 great work!
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