Please review my LinkedIn Profile

[Bruce Graham]

Please review my LinkedIn Profile. The URL is

htps://www.linkedin.com/in/highfinancialliteracy/   

Thank you, in advance – Bruce

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Hi @bruce-graham! NICE job taking action on your Profile Accelerator!! Below is my feedback:

A really nice profile photo AND background!!

Headline (words under your name):

This is the best piece of ‘real estate’ on your LinkedIn profile. Let’s really make it POP. How about something like this…

Want ____ WITHOUT ____?☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!

(You can take out the [LOCATION] part if it is not applicable)

Summary:

Your summary looks AWESOME! Few little tweaks I’d like you to make:

First, there is a HUGE gap in the middle of your summary. Make sure to get rid of all of that space.

Take out “&” from the first sentence and write out “and”

Please remove the following. It does not belong in the middle of your summary. Your contact info goes at the very end with your call to action:

“I would love to help you, or someone you care about. Call me at 847 401-3438 or check us out at http://www.terricoenterprises.com.”

Call to action:

Your last sentence, your current call to action, is not that great. I’d love for it to be a complete sentence. Try this:

“If you’re ready for _______ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me in your revision!! 🙂

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