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Please review. I’ve finished the LinkedIn module. Thanks!!!
https://www.linkedin.com/in/carolalinden/
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Hi @carol-linden! NICE work on your profile, I’m happy to provide you with feedback. See below:
Beautiful profile photo!! Can you email it to our graphic designer, Lindsey, and ask her to add a white background for you? This will really make it pop, rather than having a dark background color.
Your background photo is bad… but it also isn’t great. I want you to email our graphic designer and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something for you to use!
Headline:
I actually like your current headline! Although, I’d be upset with myself if I didn’t recommend you give it a little spice to make it POP! Check out the template below and fill it out if you want that eye-grabbing factor —>
Want _____ WITHOUT ________?☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients_____☆☞ MSG Me!
Summary:
Please make sure you watch Halle’s video called: “BENEFITS MARKETING and BENEFITS MARKETING II videos in the Transformational Business Strategy module (bottom middle module on your MAIN DASHBOARD – turquoise with a bullseye) video index is to the right of the video window, in alphabetical order.
Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important.
Please remove your contact info from the beginning, and put it at the end with your call to action.
How about you ask 3 POWERFUL pain point questions your clients struggle with.
What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?” THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.
Also, your paragraphs are a bit chunky and need better organization. (check out Kent’s profile and COPY his outline and just add your information to it)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
You want to provide information that is:
Telling your readers WHO you work with, HOW you help them and WHY they should work with you. It’s nice to educate them but not throughout the entire profile.
Remember, this isn’t a resume but a sales letter for WHY they should want to work with you.
Call To Action:
You need one!
“If you’re ready for _______ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me in your revision!! 🙂
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