PLEASE REVIEW MY LINKEDIN PROFILE

[Mike Merriweather]

https://www.linkedin.com/in/mike-merriweather/

 

Thank you!

Mike Merriweather

[n d]

Hey @mike-merriweather! Nice job taking action on your LinkedIn profile! Below is my feedback:

– Great profile photo! I want you to email it to our graphic designer and ask her to add in a white background for you to make it professional —> Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline (words under your name) — this needs work and I’d like to you fill this out and add it to that location:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
Summary:

(examples below)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/
I love the format but currently, your content is heavily focused on “i” and “me” and “my” — essentially… you really want to make it about THEM and how you can serve them.
Outline of summary you can follow and fill in:

Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important. How about you list 3 questions your clients struggle with. What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?”

• THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.

 

2 sentences how are you different than your competitors

Who you like to work with

Then add a call to action with your contact info:

If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______to see if we’re a good fit!

• This reply was modified 6 years, 5 months ago by n d.

[Mike Merriweather]

Hi Negeen,

Thanks so much for the feedback.  I’ll make the recommended adjustments.  Is it okay to have you review it again once changes have been made?

Thanks,

Mike

[n d]

Absolutely, @mike-merriweather 🙂

 

[Mike Merriweather]

Hi Negeen,

Here’s the rewrite.  Looking forward to your feedback.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/mike-merriweather/

Thank You!

[n d]

@mike-merriweather you NAILED it on this one!! Your profile looks fantastic and immediately grabbed my attention from beginning to end! Super proud of you 🙂

 

[Cheryl Burke]

https://www.linkedin.com/in/drcherylburke/

 

[Mike Merriweather]

That’s awesome news!!!  Thank you!  Looking forward to moving forward with the rest of the module now 🙂

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