4 years, 10 months ago-
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Please let me know how to make my profile better. I was totally overthinking it this weekend. So I cleared my mind and heart and this is what I came up with. Any help you can lend will be great.
Thank you
http://www.linkedin.com/in/icesiscruz
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Hi @icesis-cruz, love that and SO proud of you for taking that Massive Imperfect Action!! Below is my feedback:
Okay so right now, with all the fonts and emojis, its a LOT going on.
We really want to establish a cohesive, clean, and professional profile that will also grab people’s attention (but in a different manner).
First and foremost, I’d like you to change your name’s font back to the original LinkedIn font, remove the emoji’s by your name. You can keep bold if you’d like it!
Beautiful profile photo!! I do want to be able to see your face so zoom in more or take another with your head not tilted. Can you send your profile photo to our graphic designer, Lindsey, and have her add a white background for you?? This will help with the professional factor.
Your background banner image can be improved. It doesn’t really tell me what you do. I’d also like you to email our graphic designer, Lindsey, and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create a custom banner!!
Headline (words under name):
What you have is ok but it could be better! Try filling this out or use the example below:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!
Summary:
So, the idea is there and the content is good BUT the random capitalized words, and the amount of emojis is making it a little hard to follow.
This is what your profile would ideally look like (which, you can copy):
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/Please refer to these profiles from other realtors in the program. Copy the FORMAT/outline and pay attention to the way they lead you through their profile.
They detail HOW they help their clients, WHO they work with, etc.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/You could start your summary off asking 3 short and sweet and POWERFUL pain point questions!
Call to action:
You need something like this:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions – good work 🙂 !
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