Please review my Linked-in profile

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- April 24, 2018 at 1:00 pm #9101
  Luana Pereira
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  @luanapereira@kw.com
  https://www.linkedin.com/in/luanapereirarealtor/
  
  thank you,
  
  Luana
- April 24, 2018 at 4:38 pm #9180
  n d
  Keymaster
  @negeen@coredm.com
  Hi @luana-pereira! Awesome job on your LinkedIn profile, your cover photo, and profile photo are very professional!
  
  Few things:
  
  I want you to take out –> “NEW CONSTRUCTION Specialist…DEDICATED..PROVEN..RESULTS… SAVE TIME & MONEY–CALL ME.”
  
  Also, I want you to look at this profile example below. Look how she leads the conversation. I want you to copy that because you have great content, I just want it to flow a bit better. Copy her outline 😉
  <p class=”p1″><span class=”s1″>https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/</span></p>
- April 24, 2018 at 6:05 pm #9203
  Luana Pereira
  Participant
  @luanapereira@kw.com
  Thanks Nageen. Is this better?
  
  https://www.linkedin.com/in/luanapereirarealtor/
  - April 24, 2018 at 9:34 pm #9266
    n d
    Keymaster
    
    @negeen@coredm.com
    @luana-pereira, YES looks excellent! Great work 🙂
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