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@Hi @frederick-braun! Thank you for making a separate post! Below is my feedback.
There is a lot of great information in here and you make it apparent that you are very knowledgeable in your field. However, it is WAY to you focused on you!
I’d love for you to re-organize your infomercial by filling out this template.
This will really help get your message across in a powerful way that will grab your ideal client’s attention!
“Are you WANTING _________?Do you NEED __________?
Want __________?
If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!
Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients _________.
(2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)
(you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)
If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.”TAG ME IN YOUR REVISION!
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