Please Review My Infomercial

[Claudia Dill]

@negeen-dargahi, @amanda-hendrickson

I do not see my original submission from 2 days ago but that’s ok cuz it was …not very good.  Here is my next version.  Please review and comment.  Thank you!!

Hi there.  I’m Claudia Dill and I want to buy YOUR house!

Are you stressing over how long it is taking to sell?  I can relieve that!

Are you tired of the ongoing prep and disappearing act you have to do every time someone wants to view?

I can stop that.

Are you a worn-out landlord who is done with the midnight calls because the toilet is clogged?  Let’s end that right now!

Transferred or moving and now paying 2 mortgages?  Yikes!  Let’s find the best way to stop that NOW!

I buy houses in any condition and in most price ranges, with many options.  The process is simple and seamless.  Sound interesting?

Message me here at LinkedIn and let’s see if we are a good fit!

[Claudia Dill]

@amanda-hendrickson, @negeen-dargahi

Bre just informed me my submission should be in a Word doc.  Here it is in that format attached below.  Sorry!

 

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[Anonymous]

@claudia-dill Thanks! Are you wanting to record this at Summit? If so please send the word document to summit@coredm.com

[Claudia Dill]

@amanda-hendrickson  Ok.  Will do…any suggestions re: content before I do so?

 

[n d]

Tagging you in this @amanda-hendrickson ^

 

[Fred Braun]

Please review my infomerecial

 

http://www.linkedin.com/in/fredbraun

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[Anonymous]

Hi, @frederick-braun

Can you please post this in a separate thread in the infomercial review topic? You posted on Claudia’s review request. I will give you feedback on yours but first, you need to make a new post. That way Claudia it doesn’t get confusing trying to figure out who’s feedback is who’s. Make sense?

[n d]

Tagging you in this @amanda-hendrickson

 

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