Please review HERO STORY

[Donna Harris]

Attached is my hero story. I wrote it from one of my client’s perspective because I couldn’t figure out how my story on how I got here would make a seller/buyer want to work with me. Hearing a story of one of my clients, I’m sure they can relate to going from a small house to a larger one, and possibly having a previous bad experience.

 

Thanks!

@halle-eavelyn

@negeen-dargahi

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[n d]

Hi @donna-harris! AWESOME job taking action.

Can you email your hero story as an attachment to –> Halle@coredm.com , please?

This will help her provide you with feedback – please allow up to a week for that.

In the meantime, please continue through the program! Keep it up!!

[Jennifer Martin]

@halle-eavelyn I know you are BUSY! When you can get back @donna-harris that would be great. We had a Mid-term call today and she’s ready to rock and roll.

[n d]

Hi @donna-harris – Halle is reviewing Hero Stories via email.

Please email your hero story as an attachment to –> Halle@coredm.com

cc: @jennifer-martin

[Donna Harris]

I have already emailed @halle-eavelyn , over a week ago, and have not received a response yet. @jennifer-martin  @negeen-dargahi

[Halle Eavelyn]

hi, @donna-harris – I will get to you as soon as possible.  PLEASE 1) keep going and 2) Make sure you’ve put your BEST DRAFT forward – I only review it once. THANK YOU!!

[Halle Eavelyn]

Hey, @donna-harris, the story is charming; however, it’s NOT YOURS.   May I ask what your own story is? This is a great ARTICLE that I would love for you to post on LinkedIn!!  I just want to know about YOU and this doesn’t tell me about you at all.  When we want to build the “know, like and trust” factor, we want to do it with the person themselves – I learned a LOT about Jennifer, and how you can help me sell my house – for the sellers who want to know you, this isn’t giving them the chance.

YES, I know it mentions that you can use a client’s story somewhere – our experience with hundreds of clients is that you are often hiding GOLD under the covers – and that taking the time to talk about you WILL yield that gold!

I suggest you send me a private email (halle@coredm.com) outlining your own story, even briefly, and give this part of the program a chance to work for your best!!

cc. @negeen-dargahi

• This reply was modified 5 years, 6 months ago by Halle Eavelyn.

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