Hi @mark-clark! Welcome to the program – happy to provide you with feedback, below:
GREAT profile photo – please zoom in so we see more of your face and less of your body.
Your banner image is very fuzzy – please email our graphic designer, Lindsey, and tell her about your field of business and she will create something custom for you. She can even add a white background to your profile photo if you’d like.
You can also try this as an option (you can copy and paste this):
Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Arizona☆☞ Message Me!
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GOOD WORK!!
TYPO: “fist-timer” – to “first timer”
Remove randomly capitalized words like “Sell”.
Try to keep the focus on them – you talk about yourself in a big paragraph. Try to shorten it and instead mention WHO you work with, HOW you help your clients, and WHY they should work with you.
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!
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