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      Mark Clark
      Participant
        @works4u@longrealty.com

        Hi Negeen

        here is my link

        https://www.linkedin.com/in/mark-clark-048971138/

        thanks

        mark

         

         

         

      • #44810

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @mark-clark! Welcome to the program – happy to provide you with feedback, below:

          GREAT profile photo – please zoom in so we see more of your face and less of your body.

          Your banner image is very fuzzy – please email our graphic designer, Lindsey, and tell her about your field of business and she will create something custom for you. She can even add a white background to your profile photo if you’d like.

          Lindsey@coredm.com

          Headline:

          Good headline!!

          You can also try this as an option (you can copy and paste this):

          Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Arizona☆☞ Message Me!

          Summary:

          GOOD WORK!!

          TYPO: “fist-timer” – to “first timer”

          Remove randomly capitalized words like “Sell”.

          Try to keep the focus on them – you talk about yourself in a big paragraph. Try to shorten it and instead mention WHO you work with, HOW you help your clients, and WHY they should work with you.

          Here is an example of a good realtors profile: https://www.linkedin.com/in/elois-fuller-9b033723/

          Nice call to action!!!

          Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!

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