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Hey @kendra-martin!
Nice work taking massive imperfect action on your profile! Below is my feedback:
I really like your cover photo! Very informative.
Great profile photo! Can you email your picture to our graphic designer and have her add in a white background for you —>
Lindsey@coredm.comHeadline (words under your name) — this needs work and I’d like to you fill this out and add it to that location:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
Summary:(examples below)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/You don’t really have enough information and I’d like you to refer to those examples of what we want your profile to look like!
Outline of summary you can follow and fill in:
Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important. How about you list 3 questions your clients struggle with. What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?”
- THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.
2 sentences how are you different than your competitors
Who you like to work with
Then add a call to action with your contact info:
If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______to see if we’re a good fit!
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