Please Reviem LinkedIN Profile

[Alberto Siapno]

Hello,

Please review my LINKEDIN profile at www.linkedin.com/in/albertosiapno.

Thank you.

[n d]

Hi @alberto-siapno!! Nice job taking massive imperfect action!

Great profile photo! Can you email your picture to our graphic designer and have her add in a white background for you —>
Lindsey@coredm.com

She ^ can also help with background photos.

Headline looks GREAT!

Summary:

I want to know HOW you can serve your clients. Your story that you put does not make me want to pick up the phone to call you, unfortunately. Look at these profiles below of other realtors in the group. Copy their outline!

(examples below)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/

Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important. How about you list 3 questions your clients struggle with. What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?”

THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.
2 sentences how are you different than your competitors

Who you like to work with

Then add a call to action with your contact info:

If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______to see if we’re a good fit!

 

[Alberto Siapno]

Hi @negeen-dargahi,

I really appreciate the input.  I have adjusted my Linked In profile.  It took me awhile.  Could you please review it again and let me know what you think.

 

Thank you.

[Alberto Siapno]

Hi @negeen-dargahi,

I really appreciate the input. I have adjusted my Linked In profile. It took me awhile. Could you please review it again and let me know what you think.

Thank you.

[n d]

Excellent job @alberto-siapno!!!!!

You can now start connecting 🙂

 

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