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Thanks for reviewing my profile! Sue
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Hi @susan-sue-pantages! Thank you for your patience while I worked on your feedback AND welcome to the program – happy to provide you with feedback, below:
Beautiful profile photo! Your background banner image would need to be changed. I’d love for you to have a custom image made that directly represents your field of business.
Please email our graphic designer, Lindsey, and tell her your field of business and she will create something better for you!
Headline (words under name):
Right now you have written “Principal Broker at Summa Real Estate Group” and based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
or you could use:
Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!
Simply copy and paste.
Summary:
Your summary/About section is a sales letter to viewers and potential clients that visit your LinkedIn page. You want to immediately capture your reader so that when they get to the END of your sales letter, they see your call to action.
When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.
Detail HOW you help your clients, WHO you work with, why they should work with you.
HERE IS A REALTORS PROFILE EXAMPLE you can get inspiration from:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/elois-fuller-9b033723/
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
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Going back through the lesson would be helpful as far as content goes if you are still confused.
Call to action:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!
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