Hi @zak-fang!! A really nice start on your LinkedIn profile! Below is my feedback:
Background photo – this could look more professional. If you want to keep the quote, keep it! Or consider an image of something related to the stock market or “retirement paradise” — you can email our graphic designer to help with this —-> Lindsey@coredm.com
Profile Photo – I want you to zoom in 60% so we can see your smiling face. We don’t need to see the rest of your body 🙂 also send that photo to Lindsey and have her add a white background to make it pop!
You have loads of great information but it needs to be organized like the ones in the examples.
Outline of summary you can follow and fill in:
Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important. How about you list 3 questions your clients struggle with. What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?”
THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.
2 sentences how are you different than your competitors
Who you like to work with
Then add a call to action with your contact info:
If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______to see if we’re a good fit!
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