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Hi @thomas-dale-2, would you mind providing your profile link, please 🙂
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Hi @thomas-dale-2!
LOVE the background photo, so much better!
Your profile picture could really be better. If you could have someone take a photo of you that has color and isn’t a hue of grey and blue, that would be great!
Headline looks superb!! Nice work on that!
Summary:
Right now, you have a LOT of “i” in there.
Please make sure you watch Halle’s video called: “BENEFITS MARKETING and BENEFITS MARKETING II videos in the Transformational Business Strategy module (bottom middle module on your MAIN DASHBOARD – turquoise with a bulls eye) video index is to the right of the video window, in alphabetical order.
There’s far too much emphasis in here on YOU and not enough on THEM – these videos will help you see why it’s important to make it so much more about them!
For your summary, here how you can start it off better:
What I Do In A Few Words:
I help clients and companies TRANSFORM empty walls into a professional STATEMENT piece.
Essentially…
With my expertise in art and design, I can truly change the atmosphere of any environment!
WHO I WORK WITH:
Clients who are __________, _________, _________, and MORE!
When you work with me, you not only get __________ but you ALSO get _______.
YES. You read that right!
Here’s what clients have said:
[THOMAS, write 1 sentence worth of testimonial, that’s it]
**again, please refer to Kent’s profile outline here —>Â https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
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