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[Diane Lashbrook]

Here’s my profile:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/diane-lashbrook-3368181b/

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Hi @diane-lashbrook! Welcome to the program and nice work taking action on your profile. Below are my comments for revision:

Your current profile photo nice but I’d like you to have a photo where you are facing the camera. Right now, you are somewhat turned and your photo would be a lot more powerful facing forward. Do you have a better photo that is of high quality? If you email it to our graphic designer, Lindsey, ask her to brighten the photo and add a white background for you. Once she sends the photo back, please zoom in more so we can see your face clearly.

I don’t like your background photo very much. It’s not very inviting or professional. I’d also like you to email Lindsey, and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better!

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline (words under name):

I’d love for you to think of your perfect client’s pain point and add that in your headline slot. That is the best piece of real estate on your profile 😉 Try filling this template out and copy and pasting:

Want _______ WITHOUT ________?☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _______☆☞ Message Me!

About section:

VERY IMPORTANT*  a lot of the focus is on YOU and not enough on them.

You want to provide information that leads them effortlessly through your sales letter.

You want to detail HOW you help your clients, WHO you work with, WHY they should work with you.

Here is an example:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/paulgennuso/

PRO TIP: if you want to save time, you can use Kent’s outline (we teach it in the program) and use it as an outline. Just add your own information to it and that will help greatly.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

CALL TO ACTION – you need a better one:

If you’re READY for _______ message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂

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