New Infomercial Review

[Leah Volkov]

@negeen-dargahi Can you please review my infomercial for me?  Thanks so much!

 

Have you recently been appointed as Personal Representative for a loved one’s estate?  Are you unsure where to begin? We know it can be difficult to wrap your mind around the Probate process and your many duties as the P.R. The stress and strain of losing your loved one doesn’t make it any easier.  

 

My name is Sarah DeBell and I am Leah Volkov and we are the REALty Sisters. Together, we help families in Lane County navigate the Probate process. We understand firsthand how delicate and stressful these situations can be and we have the structure, support and expertise that you have been searching for. 

 

We are not investors; our goal is to get as much value out of the home as possible. Sometimes it is as simple as doing a few repairs to a family home, or as complicated as sorting through a lifetime of treasures. Regardless of what your specific stressor is, we will dig into our resources and find a solution. 

 

We hope this is the extra help you’ve been waiting for. Call or text us at 503-551-7392 to get started.  

[n d]

Hi @leah-volkov, yes you got it. Below are my comments:

Let’s make the first question less complex and more empathetic:

Have you recently been appointed as Personal Representative for a loved one’s estate?

Have you recently lost a loved one and are now in charge of their estate? 

Make sure to say the full word of P.R.

Instead of “we hope” put “we are” to assert confidence in your potential lead.

“We hope this is the extra help you’ve been waiting for.”

Everything else looks awesome!! Good work.

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