My Trojan Horse Question Review Request

[Debbie READ-KLUG]

1.        Hey,   it is great to finally connect on Linkedin,   What is your core business ?
2.        Then we should chat for a few minutes, catch up and see if there is a beneficial fit.    What is your mobile ?______________

Debbie Read-Klug

[n d]

@debbie-read-klug this is a good start! Few things:

I want you to shorten Q1. The shorter the better and right to the point*

Q1: Great to connect, [NAME]! What’s your core business?

For your second question, take out “then” and also take out “catch up and see if there’s a beneficial fit” – the reason being is: this is not alpha. This will allow the other person to potentially take control of the conversation. Instead, you can say:

Q2: Love it! I have a couple of awesome strategies that are perfect for you! What are a few time windows you have available to chat?

[Debbie READ-KLUG]

I am unable to open for the second time the video to upload my 30 sec. infomercial.    I started it and had to stop it, and now I cannot get it to play

so I do not know how to get the video to you in the proper location.   Could you please advise.

 

Debbie Read-klug

[n d]

Hey @debbie-read-klug – if you want to just email it to me as an attachment, that should work:

negeen@coredm.com

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