MY RAW CONTENT

[Jaime Gomez]

@halle-eavelyn, @negeen-dargahi

I am working in my “Raw Content” can anybody review this story and see if it correct or I need to improve, please.

A couple had purchased a home with my assistance in 2004, unfortunately, a few years later the marriage began to deteriorate. Throughout the years the house was never updated. However, the house was in a great location. In 2016 the owner called me to put the house in the Market. Base in their request I work on the CMA (comparable market analysis) at the same time the house next door was investing around 100,000 dollars in updating before they also put out their home in the market. My seller in other hand did not have the money to make any improvement, not even interior paint. I asked my sellers if they would let me update some areas of the house to be competitive with the next door competition to gain more equity as long as they pay me back at closing. In a separate agreement, they agreed. I took the lead to hire a contractor, and I expend $32,000 of my money, and I sold the house with a price very close to the next door property, and my seller’s equity was close to $400,00 after he paid me what the $32,000 that I expend to update his house.

[n d]

Hi @jaime-gomez, is this an excerpt from your hero story?

 

[Jaime Gomez]

Not this is from the Lesson 2 in the LinkedIn Profile Accelerator

1 Intro -2 industries -3 Keywords -4 Headline -5 Set the Scene -6 Raw Content -7 Summary

So it is the Number 6 RAW CONTENT

[n d]

Hi @jaime-gomez! Thanks so much for clarifying.

What you had sent over is good. Once you do your best on your LinkedIn profile, send it over for review and I can help you make that raw content flow better in your summary.

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