We really love helping districts, but there is a huge demand for this program and there are only a few spots open per month.
This application is simply designed to help me understand if you’d be able to apply the strategies that have worked for our powerhouse clients.
THERE IS A HUGE DEMAND FOR THIS PROGRAM AND THERE ARE ONLY A FEW SPOTS OPEN PER MONTH. TELL ME WHY YOU ARE THE BEST PERSON FOR THIS AND WHY YOU SHOULD BE SELECTED.
So here you’ve said the same sentence twice. Is it important to do so? If not, I’d change the 2nd one to:
Due to our limited demand, TELL ME WHY YOU ARE THE BEST PERSON FOR THIS AND WHY YOU SHOULD BE SELECTED.
I also would NOT use all caps throughout whole sentences.
Next, move the question about the financial decisions up. It seems like a dangling one at that late stage.
I would either replace the question about time frames with something more straightforward, or add (your edit of) this:
We often need to time our start dates due to demand. Please answer accurately so we can slot you in properly. If chosen, I can get started:
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