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Hi @michelle-kalmore!! NICE job taking massive imperfeCT action on your profile!
Below is my feedback:
Beautiful profile photo!!
While your background photo of the beach is nice… let’s make it related to your field of business. Because you’re in palm beach, maybe a house on the beach! Instead of just the beach.
I want you to email our graphic designer and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create a better background image for you to use!
Headline:
This is the best piece of ‘real estate’ on your LinkedIn profile.
Your phone number belongs at the bottom of your summary with your call to action.
So, let’s clean up your headline and really make it POP!
How about something like this…
Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ MSG Me!
Summary:
I love the way you started off your summary! It really grabbed my attention!
BUT… the rest of your summary falls flat AFTER you “Essentially here it is in a nutshell”
Check out these profile from realtors in the program and get inspiration on how you can organize your points – copy the way they outlined their profile!
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/Good call to action!
Please tag me in your revision!!
(Also, I made this a NEW post but next time you want feedback, please make a brand new post so it isn’t in someone else’s question forum – this will help us get to it faster 😉 )
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