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This is my updated Linkedin profile web address… https://www.linkedin.com/in/christopher-garner-74025724/
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Hi @christopher-garner! Thank you for submitting your profile for review – below is my feedback!
Profile Photo:
This is your business professional photo – having an image with someone other than yourself isn’t recommended. Try to find a professional photo of yourself looking at the camera and smiling. Check out Kent, Anthony, Matt or Halle’s LinkedIn profiles for examples.
I don’t like your background photo very much. It’s not very inviting and the image is too stretched. I’d also like you to email our graphic designer and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better!!
Headline:
This needs some work. What you currently have is “Sr. Mortgage Planner @ Total Mortgage”
How about filling out this template:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
Summary:
There needs to be better information and better organization to lead them effortlessly through your sales letter. Please look back through the lesson!!
Please refer to these profiles from other realtors in the program. Copy the FORMAT/outline and pay attention to the way they lead you through their profile.
They detail HOW they help their clients, WHO they work with, etc.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/You could start your summary off asking 3 short and sweet and POWERFUL pain point questions!
when you’re writing your testimonials, keep it SHORT. 1 sentence per testimonial.
You also need a call to action. How about this:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Once you’ve made all of these changes, let me know and i’ll take another look 🙂
Please tag me in your revision 🙂
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