LinkedIN Profile revised

[Scott Trueblood]

Hello All!

I just revised my LinkedIn profile. Feedback is welcome!

Thanks and enjoy your Monday!

Scott

[n d]

Hi @scott-trueblood, much better and great photo!

Your content is good but can you copy Kent’s format –> https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Yours will really shine if it looks like that!

Let me know if you need help!

 

[Scott Trueblood]

Hey @negeen-dargahi

Thanks! Yeah–it’s certainly an improvement.

I may need a little more specific info on what I need to copy format-wise from Kent’s. Can you expand on that?

Thanks a ton!

Scott

 

[n d]

Hi @scott-trueblood, absolutely!

Notice how he starts off his summary saying:

“WHAT I DO IN A FEW WORDS:

I help clients ___________

Essentially…

You get __________.”

… see how he leads the conversation and adds space between his sentences to really make it easy to read? You can even copy his format and the way he entices his readers and just add in your information if you’d like. Just take note of the spacing and format.

 

[Scott Trueblood]

How’s this?

 

WHAT I DO IN 20 WORDS OR LESS.
“I work with small to medium size companies that operate in competitive industries who want to grow.”
Essentially…
I create and implement a customized branding plan that is goal and budget oriented that allows you to focus on running your business.
and
I track sales results, essentially serving as an extension of your marketing department, eliminating the stress of handling marketing but relinquishing no control of the message or media.

WHO DO I WORK WITH? Typically, BrandVision’s clients are small to medium sized companies. If you have a marketing department of six or seven people doing six or seven jobs, we can help with printing and promotional products, but for marketing management, you’re probably covered!
If you or one other person is handling your complete marketing efforts, and you’re looking to grow and lighten the workload, then we should talk. Admittedly, I don’t work with everyone who reaches out. My clients quickly become friends, so if I wouldn’t list someone as a friend, I probably wouldn’t be willing to work with them either.

WANT AN EXAMPLE?
A PERSONAL INJURY ATTORNEY that was struggling to develop a distinct brand in a competitive market—increased new client files by 30+% in our first year and saw double-digit growth consistently for the next eight years.
A COMMUNITY BANK that saw Total Assets grow from $80m to $114m in three years with a more relevant brand…another that saw Assets grow from $10m to more than $209m and counting.
A REALTOR needing to move six luxury condos—we developed a six-month sales plan, which we sold every unit in three months …to name just a few examples.
WHAT DO YOU WANT TO HEAR FROM ME?
What I look forward to more than anything is building those productive relationships that leads to hearing, “Wow…you’ve made such a positive difference in our business!”
Hearing that is always music to the ole ears!
NEXT STEP…
If you are ready to build an impactful brand in your category, or just want to lighten your To Do List, then we should work together.

SHOOT ME A MESSAGE and let’s chat!

[n d]

Hi @scott-trueblood! I’d love to see this in your profile! Can you add it and then let me know so I can check? Also, make sure that you don’t have bulky paragraphs and to add spacing like Kent has 🙂 GREAT work!!!

 

[Scott Trueblood]

Hey @negeen-dargahi,

Here ya go…let me know if we’re getting closer!

https://www.linkedin.com/in/strueblood/

[n d]

@scott-trueblood FAN-tastic work! Your profile has come a long way and your hard work is paying off 🙂

Lastly, your headline could have a better attention grabber. Consider this template:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!

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