Linkedin Profile review request

[Pam Porter]

Is it recommended to have premium or will this work with a standard profile?

https://www.linkedin.com/in/pamelarporter/

[n d]

Hi @pam-porter! You don’t need to have a premium to be successful in the program, but Matt discusses this more in the 2nd Module Advanced LinkedIn!

Below is my feedback on your profile:

Do you have a profile photo of you looking at eye level with the camera?? This photo is zoomed in to the point where I can’t really distinguish your face and the text on your profile photo (which looks good) is covering half your face. Try to find another photo of you smiling at eye level 🙂

GOOD banner image!!

Headline:

Love the headline!!!

About Section:

You are so close on your sales letter but I feel it could be a bit more powerful.

Check out this profile of another realtor in the program – I’d love for you to model yours after hers and see how she carries you through her entire process and sales letter:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/elois-fuller-9b033723/

Remove summary at the end and put your Call To Action there instead:

Call to action:

If you’re READY to _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!

[Pam Porter]

Updated as requested with a few differences…i really liked Eloise’s

 

i do not currently have another photo but it is on the list of things to do

 

https://www.linkedin.com/in/pamelarporter/

[Pam Porter]

Updated as requested with a few differences…i really liked Eloise’s

 

i do not currently have another photo but it is on the list of things to do

 

https://www.linkedin.com/in/pamelarporter/

[n d]

Hi @pam-porter, your about section looks fantastic – just try to remove random words that have the first letter capitalized in the middle of sentences that don’t need to be like “Safety Worries” and “Me” etc.

You’re good to move forward 🙂

 

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