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Hi!!! @negeen-dargahi @halle-eavelyn please review and let me know how I can create a better headline and profile please. Thank you!
(18) Joy Ann (Joy Ann Lopez) Harris | LinkedIn
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Hi @joy-harris! It is wonderful to have you here in the program with us! I’m happy to provide my feedback in the comments below:
Your profile photo is lovely but I would like it to be centered and with a white background. This will enhance the photo and look more professional. You can do this by emailing the photo to Lindsey, our graphic designer.
You also need a better background banner image behind your profile photo – I’d love to see something closely related to your field. Please also email Lindsey what your field of work is in and she will create something custom for you.
Excellent work!! This looks great!
About Section:
This will be easy for you because your content is AWESOME – you just need to organize your points a bit better and more a few things around.
I’d love you to start off with WHAT you do, WHO you work with, HOW you help your clients, and THEN… go into happy clients and the ways you specifically helped them.
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Here is what we look for in a profile:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/
Call to action at the end:
Fantastic!
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Thank you so much for your feedback. I’ve already reached out to Lindsey regarding the my profile photo and background banner. I’ve also made changes to my About ME section. Once I get my back my “enhanced” photo and background banner, would you be able to review it the 2nd time around please?
Have a wonderful weekend!
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Hi @joy-harris, you are very welcome, and great work taking action!
Lindsey is typically fast but we like to give her a grace period of 72 hours due to the requests she gets. If you don’t hear back by Monday, please let me know.
When you need another review, please also comment and let me know and I’d be happy to take another look.
Thank you!
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