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Hi @don-sharp! Welcome to the program – happy to provide you with feedback, below:
Your profile photo is great! I’d like you to send it to our graphic designer, Lindsey, and have her add a white background for you so your suit doesn’t blend in with the background. Once she sends that over, please zoom in more so we can see your face clearly. Zoom in 50%.
You also need a better background banner image behind your profile photo because the information you have is cut off by your profile photo. Please also email Lindsey what your field of work is in and she will create something custom for you.
Headline (words under name):
What you currently have written is “Broker Associate at RE/MAX Gold DRE 00665533″ BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise*
How about filling out this template:Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!
Here is one example:
Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!
About Section:
I like how you’re starting off your sales letter with a pain point question! I would recommend adding 2 more short and sweet questions and then leading into WHO you work with, HOW you help your clients, and WHY they should work with you.
When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Here is what we look for in a profile:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/
Call to action:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂
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