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Hi @lynn-freimuth, it is so great having you in the program with us! Thank you for your patience while I reviewed your profile.
Great background banner image! Very professional.
I really like your profile photo but the background looks a bit outdated. Can you email that photo to Lindsey, our graphic designer? She can add a white background for you to really make the image stand out.
Headline:
Your headline is on the right path but if you could focus your message on either buyers OR sellers, this will greatly help strengthen your message. Try this:
Want ______ WITHOUT ________?🌟 EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Northern Wisconsin 🌟Message Me!
Example:
Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!
About section:
I really like your message but remove “Discover for yourself by viewing what past satisfied customers/clients have to say!
👉https://www.norwisrealty.com/testimonials/” from the middle of your sales letter. Your call to action should be the last thing they read.Your message looks good – I enjoyed seeing ways your experience is blended in with helping THEM! Nice work.
Again, in the beginning of your sales letter, please try to focus heavily one one or the other.
Here is an example:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/renita-baldwin-realtor%C2%AE-at-quality-choice-solutions-llc-314695197/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/
Good work overall!
Once you make those changes, you can submit for another review 🙂
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