2 replies, 2 voices Last updated by Maria Oddy 2 years, 9 months ago
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    • #48150

      Maria Oddy
      Participant
        @maria.oddy@raveis.com

        Hi,

        Please review my linkedin profile.

        @negeen-dargahi  @kent-littlejohn

        https://www.linkedin.com/in/maria-oddy-0703541b6/

        Many thanks

        Maria

      • #48157

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi there, @maria-oddy! Welcome to the program – it is so wonderful to have you here with us. Below are my comments for revision on your profile:

          Beautiful profile photo! Would you be able to center yourself in the photo a bit more? There’s too much white space on the left side.

          Background Banner Image: I do see that your background photo is in relation to “luxury Real Estate in Naples & Marco Island” but i’d like you to email our graphic designer, Lindsey, and share that description with her and see if she can find images of Luxury Island homes that you can have. She will create a custom banner image closely related to your business!

          Lindsey@coredm.com 

          Headline:

          I fixed some of the capitalizations so it’s a bit more consistent with the rest of your headline.

          An Aussie Selling Luxury Real Estate In Naples & Marco Island for Top Dollar ☆ I’m An EXPERT Online Marketer & Realtor☆☞ Message Me!

          About Section:

          Absolutely FANTASTIC job on your About section!! This looks perfect and I have zero comments for revision.

          Proud of you and once you make those changes, you’re good to move forward!

        • #48163

          Maria Oddy
          Participant
            @maria.oddy@raveis.com

            Thank you so much!

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