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    • #47814

      JANET MCHUGH
      Participant
        @janmchugh49@gmail.com

        https://www.linkedin.com/in/janet-mchugh-a8a971184/

      • #47889

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi there @janet-mchugh! Welcome to the program – happy to provide you with feedback, below:

          Lovely profile photo! Could you email it to our graphic designer, Lindsey, to add a white background for you? If you have another photo with higher quality, you can also send that to her. Make sure to zoom out a tiny bit so your hair isn’t cut off.

          Lindsey@coredm.com

          Also, you need a background banner image. Please email Lindsey and tell her about your field of business and she will create something better for you to use!

          Headline (words under name):

          I do like your headline BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:

          Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!

          Summary:

          When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.

          Also, you HAVE all the content, it just needs to be better organized!

          Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.

          https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

          Call to action:

          If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

          Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!

           

        • #47891

          JANET MCHUGH
          Participant
            @janmchugh49@gmail.com

            I made the change to my headline.  Contacted Lindsey but have not heard back yet.  Where can a put a great testimonial?

          • #47985

            n d
            Keymaster
              @negeen@coredm.com

              Hi @janet-mchugh-2! Sorry about that! Lindsey is very responsive – could you check your spam and also shoot her another email? Here is her email to confirm: Lindsey@coredm.com

              Additionally, you can put it towards the end of your LinkedIn About section like Kent has below 🙂

              I recommend having it be 1-4 sentences long.

              https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

               

               

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