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      Julie Sims
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        @juliesims1010@msn.com

        Hi Negeen,

        I have updated my LinkedIn Profile and the “About” section.  Can you please take a look and advise me on your thoughts?

        (99+) Julie Sims | LinkedIn

         

        Thank you so much,

        Julie Sims

      • #47222

        n d
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          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hey there, @julie-sims! Nice job taking action based off my feedback 🙂

          To confirm, did you email Lindsey about your background and profile image??

          Great headline!

          About section looks SO much better – nice work!

          Just remove your call to action “THE BEST TIME TO SELL YOUR HOME IS NOW!====>CALL, TEXT OR EMAIL ME!”

          ^ since you already have one at the end… you don’t want it to disrupt your sales letter.

          AWESOME work 🙂

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