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https://www.linkedin.com/in/marie-wood-07526b9a/
Please review my profile. I don’t have many certifications yet, but I will update as I obtain them. Any suggestions would be appreciated. Thank you!
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Hi @marie-wood! First off, welcome to the program, and nice work taking action on your profile!
Below is my feedback on changes I’d like you to make:
Great profile photo!!
I don’t like your background photo very much. It’s not very inviting. I’d also like you to email Lindsey, and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better!
Headline:
You need a better headline because what you currently have written is “Real Estate Broker at John L. Scott Real Estate”
BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
The example you can use:
Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!
About section:
You have good points but there is far too much emphasis on you and not enough on them. I would even challenge you to replace “I” with “you”.
You have good content, it just needs to be better organized.
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Look how they detail HOW they help their clients, WHO they work with, etc.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/elois-fuller-9b033723/
GOOD CALL TO ACTION!!!
Add this at the end*
If you’re READY for _______ message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂
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