4 years, 8 months ago-
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Hey All, Happy New Year!
Just finished my first LinkedIn modification, please let me know how it turned out! Thank you, super pumped to be here!
#ImperfectAction
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Hi @chris-bolger! First off, welcome to the program and nice work taking action on your profile!! 🙂
Below is my feedback on changes I’d like you to make:
Love your smiling profile photo but do you have a better photo that is of high quality? If you email it to our graphic designer, Lindsey, ask her to add a white background for you on the improved profile photo.
Your background image is OK but not great… I’d also like you to email Lindsey, and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better! She can even create a better banner image with your own images.
Headline:
Looks great!!
I would add world record breaker AFTER the “dedicated” part and before the MESSAGE ME part.
About section:
Right now, this is all I see:
14 years under fire experience
2 Broken World Records
2 Published Books
Obsession with Hypnosis, Holistic Mindset Work, and Teaching Others How to Perform better#NoClientLeftBehindÂ
You are creating a sales letter and there needs to be MORE information. There needs to be better information and better organization to lead them effortlessly through your sales letter.
If you can, I recommend copying Kent’s profile outline and adding YOUR own content to it:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
More examples below:
Look how they detail HOW they help their clients, WHO they work with, etc.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/Please go back through the lesson – you need a lot more content!!
You need to tell them:
what you do, how you help them, who you work with, why they should work with you
CALL TO ACTION – you need a better one:
If you’re READY for _______ message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂
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I love hearing that @chris-bolger!! Super proud of you!!
Keep going through the program – if you make it to the Thursday live call, share your win of accomplishing your Profile Accelerator, to the group!
Take care!
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Hey @negeen-dargahi ! I updated the About section! Thanks for sticking with me on this!
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@chris-bolger, your “About” section had a HUGE transformation and looks fantastic!! Excellent work!!
ALSO – did you email Lindsey about your profile photo and background image?? Those really need to change. The more professional the better.
Here is her email: Lindsey@coredm.com
Try to have someone take a high-quality photo of you for your profile photo!
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@negeen-dargahi Thank you!
Just emailed Lindsey all the pictures I got, willing to take more if she needs it. Crushing today and today’s trainings!
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Love it, @chris-bolger – keep it up 🙂
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