5 years, 5 months ago-
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Hey there – just completed my LinkedIn profile. Can I have one of your wonderful people give it a look for me?
https://www.linkedin.com/in/spencer-bolinski/
Looking forward to the feedback!
Cheers,
Spencer
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Hi @spencer-bolinski! You did such a nice job on your profile! I provided my feedback below:
Your banner and profile picture look GREAT!
I’d actually recommend you have a white background for your profile photo so it’s a bit more inviting.
You can email your photo to our graphic designer, Lindsey, and she can change that for you!
Also, if at any point in the future, you want a custom background image, she can do that for you as well.
LOVE your headline!
Capitalize “Leads” in this sentence so it immediately grabs someone’s attention:
“LEADS is the lifeline of an agent’s business…”
This sentence needs some restructuring. I’m not entirely sure on what you were trying to say.
“Without the predictability & consistency of a system so you can rely on… Your business struggles & ultimately fails.”
A lot of your sentences have the first words capitalized, like in the sentence below:
“I Build the System That Generates You 100’s of Leads Each Month from Facebook & Flood Your Pipeline.”
I would lowercase those OR just make certain words capitalized to stand out. Like this:
“I BUILD the system that generates you HUNDREDS of qualified leads each month from Facebook which will FLOOD your pipeline!”
I would also write out “and” rather than the “&” symbol (unless hitting the character limit).
Spencer, this was SUCH a great profile!! 🙂
Good job and if you want me to take another look, tag me and I’ll check out your revision.
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Hey @spencer-bolinski! Looks GREAT 🙂
It’s showing you don’t have a profile photo at the moment – you could be changing it at this moment but wanted to let you know!
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