5 years, 7 months ago-
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Please review and critique my profile.
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Hi @john-mccomas! Nice work on taking action – below is my feedback:
Profile Photo: Great photo! Zoom in a bit more so we see more of your smiling face.
You also need a better background photo that really reflects your business. I want you to email our graphic designer, Lindsey, and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something for you to use!
Headline:
I really like what you have but we can make it pop a bit more. How about something like:
Want To SELL Your Home For TOP Dollar Without Stress?☆EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ MSG Me!
Summary:
Good introduction for your summary but try to avoid starting most of your sentences with “i”.
How about you ask 3 POWERFUL pain point questions your clients struggle with.
You need a bit more information to lead them through your sales letter. Take a look at these examples below and feel free to copy the outline and add your own information to it.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/
You want to provide information that is:
Telling your readers WHO you work with, HOW you help them and WHY they should work with you.
Call To Action:
I like what you have, here’s another option:
If you’re ready for _______ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me in your revision 🙂
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