5 years, 10 months ago-
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Here is my updated linked in profile to review. Looking forward to hearing your thoughts!
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@negeen-dargahi Did you see this, not sure I posted it correctly!
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Hi @nathan-pfahler, sorry about that! I must have missed this. Nice start on your profile! Below is my feedback:
NICE profile photo!
You also need a background photo (the rectangular blue space behind your profile photo). I want you to email our graphic designer and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something for you to use!
Headline:
I like where you’re going with your headline but it seems too directed – let’s broaden it up a bit. Try filling this out:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
Summary:
I really like your pain point questions!! You must really know exactly who your perfect client is!
Let’s just keep it to those questions and don’t ask more than 3 in your profile so it’s not overloading them.
The rest of your profile needs better organization.
How about you copy one of these profile examples and add in your own information to it. This will really help you get your message across.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/laurabarkerjd/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/bre-zientarski/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/
You want to provide information that is:
Telling your readers WHO you work with, HOW you help them and WHY they should work with you.
Call To Action:
I like what you have! You could also try:
If you’re ready for _______ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me in your revision!! 🙂
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@negeen-dargahi I really thought I’d uploaded my newly revised profile, but appears not, so here it goes (new background and all!):
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Hi @nathan-pfahler, this looks so much better! Nice work! Few things:
Your background image, profile photo and headline all look SUPER!
Your summary has all the right information, it just needs to be re-formatted. By this I mean, there are some chunky paragraphs where I lose you.
I recommend copying Kent’s profile outline and just adding all of YOUR information to it.
–> https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Your call to action needs to be a bit better. Try sticking to this:
If you’re ready for _______ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
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