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Hi, please check out my profile @negeen-dargahi
https://www.linkedin.com/in/kskammerdiener-phd/
Thanks, Karin
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Hi @karin-kammerdiener, nice job taking action on your profile! Below are my comments to make revisions:
Could you get a professional photo taken of you smiling at the camera? There needs to be better lighting as well. This is very important! Your current profile photo needs to be retaken.
I don’t like your background photo very much. It’s not very inviting. I’d also like you to email our graphic designer, Lindsey, and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better.
Headline:
Great start!!! Let’s make it a little nicer like this:
Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!
Summary:
This is a good start BUT there needs to be better information and better organization to lead them effortlessly through your sales letter.
Please refer to these profiles from other realtors in the program. Copy the FORMAT/outline and pay attention to the way they lead you through their profile.
They detail HOW they help their clients, WHO they work with, etc.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/You could start your summary off asking 3 short and sweet and POWERFUL pain point questions!
Talk about HOW you help your clients, why you’re different than your competitors. Look at Kent’s profile as a good example!
You also need a better call to action. How about this:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!
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Hi Negeen @negeen-dargahi
thanks for the review. I will work on it. I wish I had some more additional help with LinkedIn. A lot on my page looks and works different than in the training videos. I can’t find certain things (privacy, request archive, the way to ask for recommendations…)
I wish you could help me with this.
Karin
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And I have no idea who to implement those stars or hands in the text.
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Hi @karin-kammerdiener! Below are my answers to your questions stated above:
- Linkedin changes their format often, so if something doesn’t look exactly how it does in the training, it’s because LI has updated its platform and moved things around.
- To get to privacy, you go to linkedin.com, click on ‘me’ and a drop-down menu will appear allowing you to view privacy and settings. Recommendations will also appear through the settings of your profile. You must click ‘view profile’. If you’re ever stuck, please take advantage of Google or the LinkedIn help desk. Also, come to the live calls and we can show you 🙂
- To implement the hands and star text, simply copy and paste and it will show up!
- The photo is of you taking the picture in a mirror holding your phone and it is not professional, try having someone take it of you with natural light and a nice background. Does that make sense?
- Linkedin changes their format often, so if something doesn’t look exactly how it does in the training, it’s because LI has updated its platform and moved things around.
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Hi @karin-kammerdiener, you would copy the following below and paste in the “headline” slot on your profile.
Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!
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Not liking that headline. I don’t work in a specific location. Don’t have clients, a transaction broker has customers. Still don’t know how to put that icons myself.
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@karin-kammerdiener, that’s fine – tailor it to best fit you.
All you have to do is COPY the text below, go to LinkedIn.com and go to your profile, click edit and then PASTE in the headline section.
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
^ fill that out, copy and paste in the headline slot! If you’re still having issues, please come the my technical call today or the live call tomorrow!
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I changed the profile. What do you think of it now?
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http://www.linkedin.com/in/kskammerdiener-phd
Could you please review the profile again?
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Hi @karin-kammerdiener, really NICE improvements!! Did you email our graphic designer, Lindsey, in regards to your background image?? If not, please do so!
Your first 2 sentences are the most important. You want to get their attention immediately in regards to your business.
You could instead start your about section like this:
WHAT I DO IN A FEW WORDS:
I help clients like YOU sell your home to QUALIFIED buyers in the shortest amount of time.
Essentially…
When you work with me, I make sure your listing is sold in the shortest amount of time for the highest profit.
Yes. You read that right!
Call To Action:
All you have written is “I’m close” but you need to tell them to take action.
Like this:
If you are READY to make top profit selling your home, message me here on LinkedIn TODAY to see if we’re a good fit!
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Everything else looks GREAT! Profile picture still needs to be replaced in the future **
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Thank you so much. Yes, I need to put another picture and will contact Lindsey.
I will make the changes.
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Hi @karin-kammerdiener, much better!! I would also have Lindsey add a white background to your profile photo and make sure your face is centered and not too far to the right. You can fix this in the profile image settings.
Good work – you’re good to move forward!
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