2 years, 7 months ago-
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Hi @eric-jurmo! It’s wonderful having you here in the program with us! Below are my comments on your profile:
Profile Photo: I’d like you to send it to our graphic designer, Lindsey, and please have her add a white background for you. This will really help your image look more updated.
Banner image: you need on (the blue image behind your profile photo) please also tell Lindsey your field of work and she will create something custom for you!
Here is her email –> Lindsey@coredm.com
Headline: I really like what you have written – your first question is a little bit too wordy for one sentence. I’d consider shortening it down a bit if possible.
About section: your message immediately grabbed my attention but please lowercase the first letter of words that do not need to be capitalized.
I really like what your sales letter looks like – you provided a lot of excellent information! I would challenge you to replace “I” with “you” to strengthen your message.
Here’s an example:
I am Disciplined, Patient, and Conservative.
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When clients like you work with me, you can rest assured knowing that I am disciplined in my work, patient with your needs, and conservative with _________.
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Everything else looks great!
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I sent the information to Lindsey to help with the banner.
I also edited the profile https://www.linkedin.com/in/soldbyericteam/
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Hi there, @eric-jurmo! Absolutely FAN-tastic job implementing my feedback! Your content kept me hooked the entire way through your sales letter!
Excellent! You are good to move forward in the program!
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