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    • #47971

      Amy Almond
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        @amy@theateamre.com

        Take a look at my profile and let me know if improvements are needed. Amy (Monteiro) Almond | LinkedIn

      • #47998

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi there, @amy-almond! Thank you for submitting your profile for review 🙂

          You’ve got a GREAT profile photo! Could you email that photo to our graphic designer, Lindsey? Please ask her to add a white background for you so the photo really pops.

          Your headline is looking really good but with the caps on all the words, it’s making it a bit tough to read effortlessly.

          How about this:

          Are You Ready To RELOCATE Your Home Without Wasting Any More TIME? ✨I’m Your Resource/Expert Realtor 🏡 📲 Message Me!

          Another example:

          Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!

          About section:

          This looks super. One recommendation is to read this out loud to yourself – any parts that don’t sound like a full stop of a sentence or a full-sentence, please revise.

          Other than that, you are a rockstar already and you’re good to move on after you revise!

        • #48040

          Amy Almond
          Participant
            @amy@theateamre.com

            Thank you!  I have update all of the above. It is funny the mistakes you find after stepping away from it for a while.

          • #48051

            n d
            Keymaster
              @negeen@coredm.com

              Hi @amy-almond, your profile looks absolutely perfect! I’m so happy with your revisions and this is ready for ALL eyes to see 🙂

              NICE WORK!

               

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