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Take a look at my profile and let me know if improvements are needed. Amy (Monteiro) Almond | LinkedIn
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Hi there, @amy-almond! Thank you for submitting your profile for review 🙂
You’ve got a GREAT profile photo! Could you email that photo to our graphic designer, Lindsey? Please ask her to add a white background for you so the photo really pops.
Your headline is looking really good but with the caps on all the words, it’s making it a bit tough to read effortlessly.
How about this:
Are You Ready To RELOCATE Your Home Without Wasting Any More TIME? ✨I’m Your Resource/Expert Realtor 🏡 📲 Message Me!
Another example:
Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!
About section:
This looks super. One recommendation is to read this out loud to yourself – any parts that don’t sound like a full stop of a sentence or a full-sentence, please revise.
Other than that, you are a rockstar already and you’re good to move on after you revise!
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Hi @amy-almond, your profile looks absolutely perfect! I’m so happy with your revisions and this is ready for ALL eyes to see 🙂
NICE WORK!
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