3 replies, 2 voices Last updated by n d 5 years, 5 months ago
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    • #35201

      Paul MacDonald
      Participant
        @pmacdonald@moneyconcepts.com

        @negeen-dargahi, @halle-eavelyn, @kent-littlejohn, @anthony-simonie, @diane-hansen

        https://www.linkedin.com/in/paulmacdonald62/

      • #35218

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @paul-macdonald! SUPER job on your profile – very proud of your hard work.

          I have some tiny tweaks I’d like you to make:

          Your banner/background image needs to better showcase your field of work.

          Please email our graphic designer, Lindsey. Tell her about your field of business and have her create a better background image for you to use.

          Lindsey@coredm.com

          You’ve got GREAT content! There are some random words in the middle of sentences that have the first letter capitalized such as:

          Well Paul, How do I know I can trust you and what sets you apart from all the other advisors out there?

          Lowercase the “H” to “h”. Fix this throughout.

          After you write “HOW ABOUT THIS ANSWER” take out the * from the rest of your points.

          Everything else looks really great – nice job, Paul!!

          • #35220

            Paul MacDonald
            Participant
              @pmacdonald@moneyconcepts.com

              Negeen, I will get with Lindsey on the banner issue.  Can you take a quick look at the corrections I made?  I didn’t correct the capitalizations in the upper portion (I basically copied Kent’s style), but will if you think I should.  Thank you for the quick reply.

          • #35227

            n d
            Keymaster
              @negeen@coredm.com

              Hi @paul-macdonald! Great work taking quick action!

              I apologize on my confusion – let’s add the capitalized words back only in the headline (at least).

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              Everything else looks GREAT! 🙂

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