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Hi there, @jay-hooks, thank you for your patience while I reviewed your page.
Welcome to the program – happy to provide you with the feedback, below:
Your profile photo is lovely but it’s very blurry. Do you have a photo of higher quality you could upload? Also, I would love for your photo to have a white background so it pops a bit more. Please email the photo or a photo to Lindsey (our graphic designer) and she will do that for you.
You also need a better background banner image behind your profile photo. Please also email our graphic designer, Lindsey, what your field of work is in and she will create something custom for you.
Headline (words under name):
Jay, I really like what you have so far!! It just needs to be cleaned up a PINCH. Try to add what you wrote into the template below and copy and paste into your headline slot.
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!
Here is an example:
Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!
About Section:
Jay, the about section is the most important because this is where your sales letter will live. This section should be you introducing your reader into WHAT you do, WHO you work with, HOW you help your clients and WHY they should work with you.
Right now, you only have dates and bullet points.
If you need help with where to start…
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Here is what we look for in a profile:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/
Call to action at the very end:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂
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https://www.linkedin.com/in/jayhookssellshomes/
Negeen,
I have made the suggested changes since last week.
Please review and let me know.
Thanks.
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Hi there, @jay-hooks! Taking a look right now — did you email Lindsey about the banner image and the profile photo?? If not, please do that.
Your headline is close – I went ahead and cleaned it up for you. Please copy and paste it into that section.
READY To Sell your Home For the Most Profit WITHOUT Stress? ☆EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients Like You Save Thousands☆☞Message Me!
About section looks GREAT!!!!
Awesome job taking action – you’re good to move forward!
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