1 year, 12 months ago-
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Hey @mitch-frisch, happy to take another look!
Your profile photo looks fantastic!
Your banner image needs some work – it’s looking super blurry but also I know Lindsey (our graphic designer) can create something better. Have you emailed her by chance? If not, here is her email below. If you need resizing or logos or anything like that, just send what you need resizing and she can fix it for you.
Additionally, please email her what your field of work is and she will create a unique banner image for you. If you want the California coast in the image, just tell her and she can add something like that for you.
Headline looks awesome! I just fixed a few parts of it. (you can copy and paste in your headline slot)
Ready To Sell Your South Orange County, CA Home WITHOUT Stress And For High Profit? ☆ Our Expert Marketing Has TOP Results ☆☞ Message me!
(you can tweak the above if needed)
Your About section needs work because it is not reading like a sales letter. I want you to lead your readers through all of your points – but in cohesive sentences.
The middle paragraph is WAY too chunky, it doesn’t make me want to read it.
Take a look at this clients about section –>
https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/
I’d love for you to talk about WHAT you do, WHO you work with, HOW you help your clients and WHY they should work with you.
Their outline structure is what Kent uses and teaches in the program (feel free to use his outline):
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Call to action needed at the end:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
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Overall, you’re so close! 🙂
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!
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Hi Negeen and @lindsey@coredm.com,
I am working on the other points you made and will take all of your advice. Here is my Reach150 referral account header, The beach shot was from one of my Laguna Beach listings.
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Hey @mitch-frisch, would you please email that to Lindsey@coredm.com / she is not on this website and only corresponds through email. Thank you!
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