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@negeen-dargahi Please review my updated LinkedIn profile. I’ll get it right eventually.
Thank you.
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Hi @isom-harrison, thank you so much for your patience while I reviewed your profile!
Your profile photo and banner image look AWESOME!
Your headline (words under the name) also look great! Instead of saying “please message or DM” I want you to remain alpha and say (copy and paste the below content):
Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress? Expert Realtor Helping clients In The San Joaquin Valley Areas ☆☞Message Me!
About Section:
I’d like you to actually start your About section asking 3 short and sweet POWERFUL pain point questions and then… get into your point of why they should work with you.
Want ______ but don’t know where to start?
Do you NEED a trusted realtor to help you find QUALIFIED homes in your desired area?
If this sounds like you… you came to the right person!
When you work with me, you get __________.
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See how much better that flows??
Here is an example to get inspiration from:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/
Everything else looks good! Add what I wrote above and you’re good to move on once you make those tiny tweaks 🙂
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