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      Isom Harrison
      Participant
        @iharrison@pmz.com

        @negeen-dargahi Please review my updated LinkedIn profile below.

        bhttps://www.linkedin.com/in/isom-harrison-0898276/

        Thank you.

        Isom Harrison

         

      • #47786

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          WOW @isom-harrison!! First off, what a fantastic profile photo! You look great!

          Your background banner image is extremely eye catching – so glad we had Lindsey create one for you!

          You still need to fix your headline which currently says “Real Estate Agent at PMZ Real Estate”.

          I’d like you to use the below or fill out the template (copy and paste):

          Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!

          Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!

          About Section:

          Isom, try to break up some of the chunky paragraphs. I also recommend using less “I” and using more “you” when speaking with your clients. But overall, great content!!

          Here is a profile example to help: https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/

          Everything else looks GREAT!!

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